Potential Restrained Comments

Don't hold anything back, Jack. I love how you twist and turn words into colorful mazes and pitfalls. Great write!

This is a turbulent and wonderful poem. I detect echos of computer programming - do you do that? Binary, capacitors, several other clues. Your biograpy also mentions how your are maticulous (sp? ! ! !) - characteristic of the craft. Or are you just crafty? I loved this. I'll have to return, hoping to absorb even more meaning.