Monday, March 30, 2009

Potbelly Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've been thinking
Yeah! Watching
Men ever with a polished brow;
A clammy face
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Charles Kanyuga
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Gina Layog 14 April 2009

you're poetry is so simple, yet so moving, It breaks my heart, men's greed, its vile nature, you're very philosophical, also very lyrical... I really like that in a poetry

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Chitra - 01 April 2009

poignant and heart wrenching I too can hear that cry in my heart 10+

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