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Now, let me make a make a few points. on the length of response to feed1. Whenever a poet uses personal pronouns, they are not always to be taken literally. 2. Neat picking words in a poem, what a laughable thing! 3. These red and green colour indicators, earlier are they removed the better, to me totally meaningless, the way they are interpreted. 4. Restrictionsback/comments. Is it not applicable to some?

First of all magnificent write, a poem with a rare beauty, and I agree with the accolades given to it by the poets here.

Madam Wonderful.. Nice expression

Poems are bottled messages, it strays around until it is picked up by the right person, who would understand.You might get tired of reading all the good comments about all your poems.. Your words are very well chosen and it really makes me feel like those age old days in school when I had read those fantastic poets - wizards of words.Great write..10++

Oh! What a fantastic expression you have made dear madam. Really it has come out from your core of heart. Let me quote some lines from your poem...... Yet I write this message, In secret code Pouring out my longings, My unuttered love, My invisible desires, Into this scroll of paper In cursive, indelible ink I seal it in a bottle With no address on And let it drift over the currents Top ten. Thanks.

i was going to read THIS ONE 'cause it kept popping up on the screen while i was commenting on its neighbor Poet. but i've read and commented on this already as well AND i'm tiring, having gotten online early today and not having done my 'recommended' stretching exercises faithfully. Bad bri! ! :)

Yet I write this message, In secret code Pouring out my longings, My unuttered love, My invisible desires, Into this scroll of paper In cursive, indelible ink I seal it in a bottle With no address on And let it drift over the currents Great metaphoric poem...no less a story teller like The Veda Vyas..in the episode of Karna, makes me remember Kunti. Apart from the poetic thrills, the poem renders a pleasure of the epical world too. Thanks dear for the sharing,10+++++ for it.

“oedema” …..in u.s. I would use “edema”. But, you are still in India, right! ? :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - “Like an inalienable shadow, Always with me! When I turn around, It is right behind! It lingers in me “ “Even though “inalienable” is mentioned in the U.S. of A.’s Declaration of Independence, I thought I’d better look it up, using Google; thanks Google! My teacher may have wanted us to memorize part of the D of A, but she did not require us to know what it means! in•al•ien•a•ble inˈālēənəb(ə) l/ adjective adjective: inalienable 1. unable to be taken away from or given away by the possessor. freedom of religion, the most inalienable of all human rights synonyms: inviolable, absolute, sacrosanct; untransferable, nontransferable, nonnegotiable; indefeasible that principle is an essential, inalienable part of having ownership My favorite stanza: “Bitten by a love bug, My heart swells with oedema My love, like gnawing anxiety, Burdens me Like a knotty noose, Stifles me Like a watch dog, Follows me” - - - - - - - - - “ “Just know this much; It is from a lovely lass! ” …………..i got a little chuckle out of these lines. So it was from YOU! ? The bottle and note, I mean. But I found several added sentences on your note paper. Apparently several others had found and read the note and tossed it back into the water, knowing full well it was not for THEM, but for ME! ! ! Thanks. bri :) To MyPoemList, even though it is kind of a kind of ‘love poem’! Valsa, you are a BIG TEASE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Bri :) Even though this is a key word in America's Declaratioin in·al·ien·a·ble inˈālēənəb(ə) l/ adjective adjective: inalienable unable to be taken away from or given away by the possessor. freedom of religion, the most inalienable of all human rights synonyms: inviolable, absolute, sacrosanct; More untransferable, nontransferable, nonnegotiable; indefeasible that principle is an essential, inalienable part of having ownership - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Outpourings of a loving heart addressed to a lover whose identity is not yet known but the feelings he elicits overwhelm one and all alike. This comes as a magical spell to the reader: Like the intoxicating smell / Of the first summer rain /...Yet I write this message / In secret code / Into this scroll of paper / In cursive, indelible ink / I seal it in a bottle / With no address on

Brilliant and charming....

Yet I write this message, In secret code Pouring out my longings, My unuttered love, My invisible desires, Into this scroll of paper In cursive, indelible ink I seal it in a bottle With no address on And let it drift over the currents Beautiful lovely write. +10

This is very very outstanding indeed penned with so much emotions.........Valsa.......great write...10

An Urdu poet Jigar Muradabadi says: - Mera paigham muhabbat hay jahn tak pahunche - My message is love as long as it can reach. A beautiful poem.

Wow! 'lovely lass' and 'soul encased'....I loved it dear Val.

Only a love so deep would make a person move to the point of addressing a love letter so profound, put it in a bottle and let it flow over the currents that moves it over the oceans until it rests in the hands of someone that awaits the love that that is so freely given. Lucky one he is that receives it. An inspiring write.

A delightful poem full of emotion, a god write Valsa

All your emotions beautifully bound with desires unfolding in a letter to your soulmate, who is out there waiting for you! Beautiful write!

Fantastic poem full of feeling. Very well written

Then it is for every one a universal read your work ma'am marvellous so tasty dish u offered at PH to share can't be explained thank u

Message of Unuttered love and invisible desires in indelible ink sent in a bottle. Beautifully stated. Bottle awaited. Thank you.