Tuesday, September 10, 2019

Possessions Comments

Rating: 5.0

What I have left
Was burned with yr eyes
But when you want to replace them
I said: No, they already served
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Varsha M 09 August 2021

Possessions can be treasures as well as troubling lot too. You made it a beautiful emotional thing that encompasses someone's true feelings. The burning with eyes that means attending serves the purpose.... beautiful emotional expression.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 October 2019

No, they already served their purpose..Possessions when it becomes a burden.......... very nice poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2019

Freedom! ! Today; With past Memories. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 September 2019

But when you want to replace them I said: No, they already served their purpose.. You are very original in expressing thoughts .. here freedom. thank u. tony

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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