Sunday, July 13, 2008

Possession Comments

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You have always been mine,
ever since I met you that day,
since I have had you all has been fine,
yet everything is not okay.
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Javier Falcon
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the title, is VERY strong first of all, and saying your going to pull out a gun, and burying him in the mud, is also strong, your taping into your emotions, and its astonishing :)

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May Namoc 13 July 2008

lol. way to tap into ur jealousy! lol. awesome write. lol..don't umm....pull out a gun..and do that.....EVER. lol. just u know, lettin ya know.; ]

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
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