Possession Comments

dear bvaibhav.....it is a poem which speaks a lot.in this age of minimalism possession sounds obsolete, in the sensethat there is a very thin line between need and greed.greeding for happiness is good, not in a materialistic way.so i agree with you thatit is not good to be possessed by possession! i like the way you write......ritty

You speak the truth. And your passionate idealism becomes you.10.of course. Warm regards, Sandra

Certain amount of selfishness, or possession may be necessary for the self survival in this material world, as otherwise, everyone is likely to become a sanyasi with no attachment towards anything. This is called Maya that covers like a blanket our eyes to face the realites in the world.

And thus, Providence died...... like this a lot...and most unfortunately true. ''Penuriousity, and Hoard shall rule the world first, as bastards of the Beast...until its inimical credence be dealt fallacious by one swing of HIS Golden Sword, unveiled by the the last of The Seven Seals of The Kingdom'' Another fine quilling, my friend. A true scribe you be, Sir V.! FjR

A very philosophical poem extremely well crafted with so much truth. Wonderful writing! Karin Anderson

Succinct and powerful, love the philosophical tone of this fine piece.

possession is the residue of greed in man.there is a very thin line between need and greed, and the latter compels man to possess things even, which is not required..very thoughtful write, vaibhav!

deep....and brilliant. shines throughout. wonderful. thank you.

very beautiful thoughts.. short yet with great impact..with importance very significant 10+++ lovelots, maia

Excellent poem indeed. Small but with a lot of sense and content.

As always wise and powerful poetry, Vaibhav, you express so well a deep idea in these four lines..Thanks for sharing and best wishes. A.

More precious than material values are that which all life in the World hold Dear and possess The Organic, not omit inanimate matter Love Immortal, is surely the Omnipotence we search and can not blindly feel from within 'Sir Vaibhav Pandey, such are your profound words that inspire and enlighten misguided Humans' Clearly, you indelibly write from Soul. Bravisimo! ....louie

wonderful! ! this is a nice piece

just great............simply wonderful..............

these are great words of wisdom indeed Vaibhav... tho short.. you said it well indeed.. nicely expressed.. with love shan

Bahut kadak poem hai dost. Aapki kalam mein kranti hai..keep it up

this is very true. very very true. very nice skillz potrayed too.

Vaibhav, short but oh so true, we must not covet things. Bob

Short yet meaningful poem........Great piece...10

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