Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Possession Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love is impertinant.
It encroaches the mind
without invitation,
makes itself at home
...
Read full text

Sally Plumb Plumb
COMMENTS
Elena Sandu 28 June 2010

Hard to say what I feel reading this poem..Sometimes I am confused I do not know what to do..other times I am just happy to love anything and everything..and there are times.. when I am soo hurt and think..my life would have been more easy without having love in my possesion..but you are soo right: once there, it can be evicted from the heart. I think I would relate to the last one, here..dont know if I am right..but that' s what I got..Thank you for sharing your poems! 10

0 0 Reply
nomad omnia 05 March 2010

This is such a logical, structured description and analysis of a completely illogical condition. I brings a wry smile...as if the lunatic has suddenly seen their own madness...only to lapse back into the lucious world of fantasy. Please forgive the analogy, Sally, but what is being in love, if not lose one's head? N

0 0 Reply
Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
Close
Error Success