Monday, January 10, 2022

Positivity Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sat down, onto the large leather chair,
Looking around at the others, already sitting there.
Faces of people I didn't know,
Some glanced at me,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Sun Rise 01 May 2024

Keep that positivity in you!

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

Jayne, Though your poem has no stanzas, but 'one, I guess', AND it has but few rhymes, AND it does NOT mention MY name, I give it five stars.

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

(cont.) Good for you, your family, and PH etc. that you got through a life-threatening condition, ..at least for 20 years. Congratulations! ! ! ! : ) I'm glad you are here.

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

Sometimes people 'need' more than POSITIVITY to have the outcome they desire. You used medical assistance. You apparently felt 'positive' about the prospects of chemo....(cont.)

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

(cont.) She/he may have all-the-positivity-in-the-world, yet he/she may 'kill' her/hisself or others, ..OR 'merely' mangle body/bodies and property.

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

...(cont.) e.g. The inexperienced, drunk, 'high', careless, overconfident, misguided etc. vehicle driver may say to her/himself: 'Self, I CAN GO 89 MPH (OR 180 KM) around that curve (in the rain) '...(cont.)

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

A 'positive attitude', one which causes a person to assume a positive result will occur, such as the cure/correction of a bodily illness/injury may not hurt a person.... (or it MAY) . (continued) ....

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

'The word 'chemotherapy' ('chemo') is often used when referring to medicines or drugs that treat cancer. But, not all drugs used to treat cancer work in the same way. Traditional or standard chemotherapy uses drugs that are cytotoxic, meaning they can kill tumor cells'

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

'POSITIVE' (and from positive we get positivity) : Synonyms & Similar Words favorable good appreciative friendly approving supportive complimentary commendatory admiring accepting warm

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Lyn Paul 10 March 2023

Life can be short. We want to live a fulfilling life for as long as we can.

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Lyn Paul 10 March 2023

Jayne. You are an inspiration. "Cancer is just a word"

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Jayne Louise Davies 10 March 2023

Thank you Lyn x So appreciate your comments x

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Bharati Nayak 12 January 2022

A great write---You are a winner because of positive thought.

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Jayne Davies 12 January 2022

Thank you Bharati x

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Nabakishore Dash 11 January 2022

Optimism will take one high.nicely written.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 January 2022

Bravo Jayne I hope a beautiful time for the rest of yr life

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Jayne Davies 10 January 2022

Thank you LeeAnn for your lovely comment,

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David Wood 10 January 2022

Lovely poem about life's challenges, but your right, developing a positive mental attitude is the only way to go.

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Jayne Davies 10 January 2022

Thank you David.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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