Wednesday, December 5, 2018

Positive Thinking Comments

Rating: 5.0

Make no apologies
For being who you are
You didn't choose to be here
You fell from a star
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Lyn Paul
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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 September 2019

This is a well composed epic poem, dear Ma’am Lyn....10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2019

Positiveness! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 28 February 2019

part 2. PH throws me around from poem to poem without warning. So anyway I have great respect for those writers who can write end rhymes as easy as they breathe. I like your topic! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 28 February 2019

You have very smooth, organic rhymes that flow and do not ever sound forced. I do not have this talent for handling end rhymes like you. I do inner rhymes, they are so much easier. I have great resp

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Jennifer Birchall 15 January 2019

An Inspirational poem Lyn, we all have hope. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 03 January 2019

Thank you Lyn, for this immensely inspiring poem. 'Heal is a power That you have to believe The power of positivity Will allow you to achieve' - loved these lines, and loved your 'Poet's Notes' too!

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Smoky Hoss 13 December 2018

I certainly hope so Lyn! Beautiful!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2018

Wow awesome inspiring poem, way to go with one of your masterpieces.' We fell from a star' sounds very poetic and cool, I do believe God created us from star stuff since only He does combine celestial and terrestrial elements. Only He can. Kudos for this great uplifting poem. Soo nice to read from your inking again pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, titled, Dream Holiday places

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Ravinder Soni 05 December 2018

A fine feel and expression.

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Matthew Holloway 05 December 2018

thank you For sharing i really enjoyed this poem

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