Make no apologies
For being who you are
You didn't choose to be here
You fell from a star
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part 2. PH throws me around from poem to poem without warning. So anyway I have great respect for those writers who can write end rhymes as easy as they breathe. I like your topic! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++
You have very smooth, organic rhymes that flow and do not ever sound forced. I do not have this talent for handling end rhymes like you. I do inner rhymes, they are so much easier. I have great resp
Thank you Lyn, for this immensely inspiring poem. 'Heal is a power That you have to believe The power of positivity Will allow you to achieve' - loved these lines, and loved your 'Poet's Notes' too!
Wow awesome inspiring poem, way to go with one of your masterpieces.' We fell from a star' sounds very poetic and cool, I do believe God created us from star stuff since only He does combine celestial and terrestrial elements. Only He can. Kudos for this great uplifting poem. Soo nice to read from your inking again pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, titled, Dream Holiday places
This is a well composed epic poem, dear Ma’am Lyn....10+++