Position In Mid Air Comments

Lost in dreams and position could not regain Noticed by the sentries and presented to chief main

Whole country is mourning death, Paying homage and offering wreath, He may be buried in simple manner,

extremely well written poem sir kudos to you 10+++

GOD gave us all choices and if we choose to go the wrong way, then we must pay the consequences of our actions. very good write, and truth in every word. a ten

Your poem brought back old memories when as a young Air Traffic Controller we use to carry out simulated u/s compass talk downs with fighter aircraft, those were the days without Radar & GCA, which followed later! We had used AD-200 Cosoles rather accurately! Thanks! 10! -Raj Nandy

He will be in dilemma what to do next All his game plans will be failure even if he tried his best...10

Try to create position with point of strength...10

He pleaded guilty to be spared at once ..........10

Such was disgraced order form God to man It is punishment and u got to bear as much as you can He came to be known as “TRI SHANKU” or triangle

Some one intruded in God’s domain To watch the dancer with wish to remain Lost in dreams and position could not regain

Neither he will be welcome at home nor in city One can only feel sorry and some degree of pity

He pleaded guilty to be spared at once No one liked to be shown their even at glance They cursed and ordered to be thrown form heaven Remain in the air with head up and legs down....10

Lost in dreams and position could not regain Noticed by the sentries and presented to chief main..........10

No to gimmick and no more games to play Assert with confidence as have your sway.....10

Person looses his place and doesn’t have continuity Neither he will be welcome at home nor in city.....10

Neither he will be welcome at home nor in city One can only feel sorry and some degree of pity.......10

Such was disgraced order form God to man It is punishment and u got to bear as much as you can He came to be known as “TRI SHANKU” or triangle Neither on earth, air or in heaven with angel......10

Person looses his place and doesn’t have continuity Neither he will be welcome at home nor in city......10

They cursed and ordered to be thrown form heaven Remain in the air with head up and legs down........10

He will be in dilemma what to do next All his game plans will be failure even if he tried his best......10