Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, December 11, 2010

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She stared at my eyes as if to pose a question?
I could see anxiety on her face but found no mention
She looked worry ridden and closed eyes with tension
I could sense some urgency in her for submission
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

Kaila George I really like this...its true we dont know who people are behind that screen do we...smiles...brillant write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

Little long George Becker28 minutes ago nice rhymes tho Comment +1 It is always hard to know someone on the other side of cyber space

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

Judy Miranda23 minutes ago a little hard to follow your use of words..and I never like profanity in poetry. I do get the message tho and it is feelings

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 August 2012

She stared at my eyes as if to pose a question? I could see anxiety on her face but found no mention

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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