Saturday, April 22, 2017

Portrait Of A Lover Comments

Rating: 4.3

I paint you in vibes,
In light, in symbols and in dark,
In fullness and in emptiness,
Without space or time,
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Mohammad Muzzammil 30 March 2023

Wonderful presentation of lover in words..

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A B Faniki 07 October 2019

I superb and brilliantly crafted. I enjoyed it imnensely. Great write

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 15 January 2019

beautiful lines well articulated. dipiction of the lover is wonderful and lovely no i no you we're one, untouched, unspoken lovely.

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Chinedu Dike 07 June 2017

Beautiful depiction of spiritual experience that is love, well articulated and elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Ayni.

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Ayni Artistique 08 June 2017

You're very welcome! I'm glad the essence of it reached you. Thank you for the feedback. Blessings!

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 May 2017

I‘m diving in your depths, in mine, I feel your gentle pulse, Coming from no-where, Staying as no-thing, Sublime, Absolute. this is for me a spiritual and mystical poem. it is so rare to read such a work in poemhunter. sometimes i have longing to read such works.. thank you dear poet. love ur poem.

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Saint Cynosure 22 April 2017

This is really good work...

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 April 2017

What a poetic line! I turn myself to you, the Self itself. Thanks.

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