Saturday, February 6, 2016

Portrait Of A Fresh Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the early ray of a mild sun
Slips into my room through a crack
On the door I wake up to chirping of
Birds hopping on the sill signaling break
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Valsa George 25 July 2017

A lovely write on the beauty of a pleasant morning.... with the fragrance of opening flowers in the air, the song of birds and the early dew drops shining in the falling sunbeams...! Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem!

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 July 2017

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and giving wonderful comment. Regards.

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Cherry Joy Clamor 26 April 2016

reminds me of a rural life in my springtime. nicely penned.

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