Portrait Comments

she cannot fill in what she knows is there. Within the unsupported line, she knows that life is missing; ... excellent poem penned on the theme of the source of creation- apparently seems to me; from the nothingness the creation came into existence and again going to nothingness; and the portrait also like that comes from the nothingness and slowly to exhausting

There is that note of sorrow that never knows a better tomorrow, Stark, sharp and impactful.

Great poem my dear friend Louise Gluck.

How nicely my dear friend Louise Gluck you are writing a literary flower with spreading fragrance.

you draw the heart against the emptiness she has created/// beautiful poem penned

Beautiful, Louise. As a parent, that touched my heart