Monday, June 19, 2006

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Out on the farm there lived a pig
he'd spend the day to root and dig.
A firecracker from the sky
came down on him on 4 July.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Joseph Daly 19 June 2006

A pleasant piece my friend. I like the way that it flows towards the punchline. I feel that rhyme is alive and well when I come across poems like this.

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Scarlett Treat 19 June 2006

A pig in a wig! Oh, my! I thought it was a picture of my granny! Scarlett, he-he-he

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Gina Onyemaechi 19 June 2006

Tee-hee!

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You win the pig piece forum challenge, it HAS to be the case! ! ! Funny. Excellent as ever.

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