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I (usually)
leave at two to hear the treasured sound
of sneakers on asphalt framed in the melody
of your voice, unspoken, flowing, gorgeous
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I really liked this poem...a lot! Great stuff. I'm impressed with this and plan on looking at your other poems. I wouldn't change a thing!
I loved this just as it is. It still has a raw and fresh feel to it which you might lose if you play around it too much. Perfect as is, to me :)
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7/30/2025 4:53:07 PM # 1.0.0
beautiful. wonder if you sent this to her? wonder whether she joined you?