Friday, December 26, 2008

Porcelain Vase Comments

Rating: 3.3

She is a vase

Looking so strong and solid.
So beautiful with those flowers
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Rita Shay
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Marama Kelly 26 December 2008

Hmm. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, view and concept. In the tenth line you have 'dropp' instead of 'drop'. Overall though, the imagery that comes forth in this shows the delicacy of one who in simplicity, elegantly shines brightly to everyone who sees her, but is only truly noticed when she is adorned with beauty to enhance her simplicity. Without it she is bare and barren, unnoticeable and uninteresting. And although beautiful to look at, if broken can cause so much pain to those around. Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you

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