Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Porcelain Doll Comments

Rating: 5.0

broken, the porcelain doll is laying
tossed aside, used and shattered.
her once fair perfect porcelain skin
now cracked and crimson stained
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COMMENTS
Kelly Seale 19 August 2012

when I was reading this, images kept invading my mind, flashing images of what you described... almost as if i were there, or like a movie scene from Paranormal Activity or something. It had an uncanny, haunting effect on me. Powerful! Great Ink here! ! ! -Kelly.

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 27 February 2012

Great metaphor...great poem....and sad too. I like it...keep writing...kudos

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George King 31 January 2012

the beautiful ghost...the silenced porcelain doll...you have given the quiet enterage of loss and residual lives two superb creations...congratulation :)

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Katherine Val 30 January 2012

really beautiful poem.

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Nancy M. Godfrey 26 January 2012

Extremely moving poetry! Beautifully written. Kudos!

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Heyyou Boy 25 January 2012

If this poem dont make your heart hurt i think you might need a heart check up. Beautiful poem L.

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Sharron Stephenson 17 January 2012

this is a rel good poem and the soul and heart for witting is one to beat

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Cosmic Dreamer 14 January 2012

The death of innocence is never easy... This poem speaks to me in loud voices and i am saddened by it's echo... Your talent shines bright for all to see...

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Unwritten Soul 11 January 2012

Dont worry Silentpoet Girl, the porcelain doll just like you maybe but you not made from porcelain, you made from cells, so even you broken, you can get healed even it bruised but soon it will be okay...if you think you are porcelain doll maybe you must know, you are special edition because u can move freely...so it hard to break easily...so if you feel afraid to be broken wear a mascot of Teddy bear, it safe and not broken even fall 100000km from highest mountain :) _Unwritten Soul

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Dj Hart 10 January 2012

Except for that I am a guy.

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Dj Hart 10 January 2012

Sounds almost like me. People like me only have the pain to comfort us and know little other than being rejected or used. I know how the doll feels. i enjoyed this poem.

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William King 09 January 2012

Dark... But still personal. Inspiring and beautiful. This is an amazing piece of art.

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Dead Leaf 08 January 2012

excellent...amazing...really i liked it... top marks...

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Shadow Girl 07 January 2012

wow, fantastic powerful write... loved...all innocence was long ago stolen, as they dry upon this broken face. keep them coming! -SG xo

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Vipins Puthooran 06 January 2012

beautiful portrayal of thoughts/ 10++++

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Charles Darkly 05 January 2012

I really like this one. You said you were unsure of it but I think it's fantastic.

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(De Va) 05 January 2012

wonderfully written and expressed. your talent talks to my soul...blessings

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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 05 January 2012

this is a great poem..i feel its force inside me...quietly echoing a part of me..thank you for sharing..a 10 for me.: -)

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Kevin East 04 January 2012

Wonderful portayal of melancholy written with thoght and skill. Well done sp brilliant.

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Kara Towe 03 January 2012

Such talent, what a gift! Your words penetrate my soul. You are truly amazing!

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