Monday, June 1, 2009

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Love is like a bird flying through the air
A guy attracted to a girl with flair
Is there even a chance for the rest of us?
I really doubt it, I must confess
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Silence Dogood 02 June 2009

I like the last couplet and 'But I broke the rules, unpopular and all I found the guy, and I stood tall' I think it was good in the original some of the added lines subtracted from the story

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