Friday, June 12, 2009

* Poppy's Wine. Comments

Rating: 4.4

I remember many blue songs...
It was heartly and warmly so...
Some sounded as the silver-rain,
But it operated as poppy's wine.
...
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Roland Bastien 22 June 2009

it tastes like a old good wine. Eloquent.

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Sandra Fowler 20 June 2009

Wonderful imagery. Eloquent write in any language. 10/10, Tsira. Always your friend, Sandra

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Lynda Robson 12 June 2009

I adore your poems Tsira, refreshing to read 10 Lynda xx

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 June 2009

Amazing poem. At a higher imagination level you write with keen zeal. Song inside the mind- 10+++

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Poppy Pinot Noir...? Almost as sweet as this poeme, madamoisele T! FjR

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Taher Al-Shemaly 12 June 2009

Calmly composed. I like the imagery, specially when the moon is included.

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Catrina Heart 12 June 2009

Also my songs, that have been written, Have been written by lunar beams, then.. As is my letter all, you can not read at night, For, you must hurryup to dawn sunlight... ------ songs of the sun couldnt be read under the dusk of life........10++++++

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 12 June 2009

Poppy wine and moonbeams sweet dreams...10

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