Tuesday, June 9, 2020

Popcorn Comments

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There's corn on the chair
and corn on the floor,
corn on the couch
and corn by the door.
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Smoky Hoss
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Susan Williams 21 August 2020

I am glad to see somebody took on this pesky topic. No matter how hard I try to eat them one by one, the movie will get all dramatic and I will plow that popcorn into my gasping mouth by the fistfuls and popcorn will go flying everywhere when I shriek at the screen with horror! Pop on, Hoss, we can't let a little mess stop a good thing! ! !

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Glen Kappy 29 July 2020

Popcorn, like sunflower seeds, is one of those snack foods that’s hard not to make a mess with. As a teacher I frowned on both in the class room. You’ve hit on something, Smoky, many of us can relate to and smile at. Suggestion—you can shorten the last line to something like “and can’t keep it in my hand, ” and it will retain the sense and make it more in keeping with the other short lines. -Glen

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Phyllis Strong 13 July 2020

I love me some popcorn too. Sounds like a snacking ANYTIME, with the popcorn dropped everywhere. Pick up the corn and say; “Devil missed, God kissed it”, and eat that popcorn. LOL

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