Saturday, November 15, 2008

Poorly Defended Peninsula Comments

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a searching light scrapes the war torn skies
protecting the peninsula from the messerschmidt.
bleary and tired and bloodshot are the eyes
following the search seeing only the spots lit
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Heart Felt 17 November 2008

A powerful piece, well done. x

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