Poor Unfortunate Souls Comments

Poignant write/ good poem... The unfortunate souls like orphans

Very touching. I can feel the sorrow here, it is piled mountain high.

The children need many champions to not turn away from their cries and you are one of these who brings their voices to light. So very heart felt and full of passion I salute you for putting this out there for all to see and listen to. Very well done. I enjoy your power in its telling Jim Troy

A heart touching write that breathes sadness and pain! In your last stanza you asked if anyone feels their pain and absolutely I can answer that question: you do feel their pain and so us who read your poem and now we are aware of such inhumane situation! Thanks for sharing this sad but powerful write! 10+++ God Bless You! Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! , ...

very heart-rending...i hope pakistani govt understands this first..