Have you seen the glittering stars?
Around the Sun which sparkle more
All are having simple plan.
To make the Sun her own star;
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Poor Twilight, how long she has to wait to join with her love….? If both are happy to be joined, they why this delay? ? ? A good poem. Congratulations
Thanks for sharing your secret dreams. Deep expressed feelings on the rampage. Cheers. Subroto
your name and twilight...what a wonderful connection..........
A good poetic imagination.But I think you have to read more and learn to express feelings and thoughts with lesser words
great work, an unsaid story of passion and love between sun and twilight.... wonderful imagination which pierced in to my heart...