Friday, August 14, 2009

Poor Naive Little Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hair freshly washed
With lips of an angel
Bra tightly fastened
With modesty Enabled
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Ashley Stone
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Julianna Mcleod 28 March 2013

Love that :) sigh so beautiful... and sad

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Wow! This is beautiful and so amazingly rhymed! I love how you tell a story in the poem. It's a sad thing that happens though.: -(But your poem is wonderful and it's so beautifully expressed!

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