Poor Man Comments

It sends out a clear message that should deff. be followed! I really enjoyed it!

I think the poem tells us more about the poet than the subject of the piece.It's a stark, cold image and i was all ready to have a massive problem with this poem-until the ending.My problem would have been the stereotypical image of a homeless man-shame, needs to shave etc, however the last line was interesting.i wasn't expecting it, and it totally spun me 180 degrees around.nice work. Re; Your bio.Whitney it's ok to throw a few long words in and there, i feel a little educated after i look them up.

I wrote this because I was so tired of people blaming God for the things and people that they see. People need to realize God's done what he needed to do. He's made us to carry out his jobs. He's made us to be his servants and work for him!