Poor Little Lost Boy Comments

That once you meet It's so hard to be free.............meet a drug? answers again..............you could add are after answers and be ok, if you despise apostrophes. ha ha. :) also see my comment after 'poor little lost girl'. bri ;)

my dear Poetess, You end this poem on a very positive note.. The plight of a poor boy and at the end that you will achieve a lot was very nice. thank u tony