Monday, July 27, 2015

Poor Boy Rich Girl Comments

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He is eight just like her
But she can't understand why
He has a big belly
Just like her dad's
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Pen Anthony
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 January 2016

If only she knew Her source of amusement Was a boy who hasn't brought Hand to mouth in two days beautiful. you are making using contrast to bring in a great idea in simple words with a wonderful image. thank you dear poet. this is an eyeopener for the rich to think of the poor. let your pen become very powerful. thank you. tony

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Rajnish Manga 28 July 2015

Outstanding imagery and the mind boggling irony. The closing lines are very impressive: If only she knew Her source of amusement Was a boy who hasn't brought Hand to mouth in two days

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Allotey Abossey 27 July 2015

Very pitiful.... This is the case of many... The poor seem not to understand the rich and the rich don't understand the poor...

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