Thursday, January 17, 2019

Poor Bloke Comments

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She was his sweet honey.
But she thought that he was made of money.
She spent all his money on thrills.
She didn't care about paying bills.
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Lamar Cole
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Practicing Poetess 17 January 2019

Poor bloke is right! Men do not want to be only a walking wallet. He should've taken out a nice life insurance policy for his funeral, and appointed someone other than Honey to be in charge of his funeral costs. Interesting how we can feel for a character in a poem! : -)

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Nice poem, wisely written with a humorous touch.10+++

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