They think about today,
With lots of pains and sorrow,
They know there's no way,
To change their tomorrow.
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yes..always pain is the best motivating power. the heroine of your poem is smart to decide to overcome her cruel life by a cruel self. (i heard her roar in the poem) . fire by fire powerful poem + 10
A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
great job.. appreciating your work