Thursday, August 29, 2013

Pools Of Water (Revised) Comments

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Stepping into
opaque pools of water

a soft hand beckoned
...
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Heather Burns
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2013

Learning swimming starts with getting into water. Pools of water engulfing and body progressing forward. Beautiful poem.

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