Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Pool Of Her Tears Comments

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She hides her pain with a fake smile
She makes a fake smile with her tears
She tears with her broken heart
Her broken heart shows that she can love
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jamie newcomb
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Skyler (sky) Storm 20 May 2012

thanks and i will read some of your poems

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Dave Walker 01 May 2012

To love is the best thing in the world, you can try to hide a broken heart, but the ones who love you always know you are broken hearted. a great poem. May I invite you to read my new poem called, I Used To Be.

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