Wednesday, May 25, 2005

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Blue green water lit by moonlight
comes to life as rain from a summer storm falls into its depths.
Life chortles on lily pads,
and the smell of wet earth invades our senses.
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Judith Vriesema
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James Atkins 26 May 2005

Beautiful writing, lovely imagery with strong emotional impact. You've really captured a moment or two with this one - well done!

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