I didn't see her face,
Or figure,
Just saw a flash of her hair
From the back.
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Just that, just that much! It hung like a black pony tail. Since then, I am a great fan Of ponytails, whoever wears them.......beautiful lines inside love is hidden. Beautifully penned. Five stars.
I too am a fan of pony tails and now wear a pony tail after cutting my long hair which I used to plait earlier! A cute poem creating a kind of curiosity to know who was the person wearing it......!
i laughed softly at the last line. How about on a pony? ? :) bri
Wah! ! So nice. You have fallen in love with pony tail. Sometimes girls wear their hair as pony tails and look so cute. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
She must have had beautiful hair, and her ponytail must have been so stylish. Lovely poem.
@Evelyn Judy Buehler, Yes, indeed! Thanks for sharing your thoughts and appreciating the the poem.
An interesting fascination. Ponytails are everywhere in Australia. Sport, schools and lack of time. Let me tell you Khairul, it is fine if men have them too.
@Lyn Paul, Your suggestion made me smile! Thank you for this encouraging comment.
Thanks for thinking alike, and appreciating the poem, @Kostas Lagos.
@Yiyan Han, Thanks for the comment. Glad to have a second person who thinks alike.
An interesting and fascinating poem. Our style and manner of dressing, how we fix ourselves or our grooming can affect people's behavior and promote awareness. Beautiful poem crafted with ease and cleverness..Loved it. Five Stars! ! !