Pondering The Disposal Comments

Dick Philips called it the hog Cause it et everything Bones and all Or jus a flush off the plates. Course if yo had a real hog It'd be more better cause You cud eat it in the end. s

Images like this is what keeps the finger free to write good poems. Nice!

[Dark/ scary] but well-written! ! !

this is dark and very descriptive- really imaginative - great write

This is quite a scary poem, but its sort of my thing, beautifully written, with very vivid images. Great job. :)