Thursday, January 21, 2010

Pondering On His Existence Comments

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Lying here all alone i silently ponder.
Beside me was once a figure, a person, a lover.
Or was it just a figment of my imagination? Was he really here or was i just dreaming? ..........
No, it was real...i know it was. His scent still lingers in the atmosphere, there is an indelible impression on the pillow next to me.
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Natasha Phillips
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Ty Colbert 23 January 2010

I really liked this poem, keep writing its great

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Kenny Titus 22 January 2010

thanks for your kind comments and the suggestions.... and please do help me by commenting and rating my other poems too.... even you have a great writing skill! regards, Kenny!

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