Pondering Life Comments

I cannot comprehend the picture. Without you, tomorrow would not exist.- - - -there is such unbelievable pain in this poem that it is frightening to think we shall feel these things as we lose our loved ones

Sometimes a shard breaks away from us and the loss is irreparable pushing us to despondency. But let me here hope that every cloud has its silver lining. Thanks for sharing it on PH.

Thank you again Heather.... I would be more than happy to send you a souvenir Australian pen, even 2 so you can add the other wonderful words you have written. x

You've captured how so many people must feel when they lose a close companion. It would be lovely to hear of the shard noticing light reflecting off a similarly lonely shard, and each looking through the other to once again take pleasure in seeing the world.

Pretty thoughts of a great poet are expressed in poetry. Thanks.

A lover deep in thought... the word shard somehow really expresses the depth of pain. Beautifully written

Thank you very much madam. Pondering the life is a definitely beautiful poem and heart touchable.

As I ponder life without.. nice one...10 life can be nowhere as i dare and dream world without you

'A shard forever lost wandering the streets of life forever alone.' Very touchy! A poignant picture.

wandering the streets of life forever alone- very sad and touching, well done - Phineas Poe 23/10/2013

Excellent poem. All the meaning expressed in a well written short. Thanks. The flow was great and the meaning felt.

A lovely write expressed so well

Very sad but poignant Heather.

Sad. But very vivid. I love it. Mohabeer Beeharry

beautifully written....................................

Very nice poem.If you have time go through my poems.Thanks

Very nice poem.If you have time go through my poems.Thanks

As I ponder life without you, , dificult to imagine, , , nice one...10

A clear vision expressed succinctly; keep on writing with confidence.

A lament with heavy heart. nice poem.