Pond Of Water Comments
Deep pond of water
A mile distance away from
Where I stand near my cab
I m fond of its charm
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Wonderful poem it reminds me about the pond my grandfather had in his garden with beautiful fish and a wooden bridge that I used to watch them from.
Ohhh sir, I m glad to know that my poem reminds you about your grandfather had in his garden... Thank you very much sir
What a resplendent poem, Larika........people may undermine the pond.....but it can be considered as a nice food for poetry......10 marks to you..
Beautifully conceived equally beautiful song and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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7/23/2025 9:30:49 AM # 1.0.0
Enjoyed reading the poem. There seems to be an unbridled yearning for a divine bliss, peace and pleasure in life.Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of poetry. I quote: How far I m from it / How long I have not gone I could enjoy and feel / Coldness and water's charm The deep pond of water waves / The deep pond of pleasure.
Thank you so much Rajnish sir