Thursday, October 23, 2008

Pond Life Comments

Rating: 3.1

spuds

when the potatoes
were being worried by the dogs
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paul shannon
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Donall Dempsey 05 December 2009

Suspicion is a little master peice and that final line is both perfect and beautiful. love Donall Donall

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Bullion Grey 04 May 2009

'so when I advanced the view that imagination ought to have some reference to reality' Indeed words of a mystic....imagination IS a faculty of perception...this I know to be true. Great work..... BG

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Very interesting perspective about life-you must be an earth sign or someone devoted to outdoor living-the hounds --and isn't science wonderful? Good poem-a little oblique but your message is there if the reader looks beneath the surface.I gave you a ten because I understand.

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