Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Pond In The Desert Comments

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Tears of the cactus, from the burnt scars of love
Who forgot along the way how it felt to have trust
Tears of the cactus, who will die alone & turn to dust
Born with spikes for any foreigner who tries to get close
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2013

A fabulous rhymin poem in allusion probably. D take on cactus gives it a prickly poetic touch. Pls do coment my latest poem too.

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