Sunday, August 9, 2009

Polyjoke Cove. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tucked in a valley, a long walk away
From dwellings or ice-cream selling, paradise
................lies hiding.
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Fay Slimm
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Susan Jarvis 22 August 2009

This poem is wonderful, Fay. It not only captures the sheer magnetism and beauty of North Cornwall in the words, but the shape of the poem - with its lapping waves - really adds to the reader's experience. Wonderful stuff! S :)

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Bob Gibson 11 August 2009

Porthjoke cove sounds a wonderful place a beautiful beach, with a granite rock face caves to enter, ! suppose at low tide where children can play, lets seek and hide

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 August 2009

delightful read Fay.. I don't know what else to say.. you write most beautiful poems, never disappoint the reader.. with lovess shan

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Kerry O'Connor 09 August 2009

A wonderful poem full of sensory images.

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Carol Gall 09 August 2009

thank you i close my eyes and i am there through your words 10

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Bob Blackwell 09 August 2009

Polyjoke, cave sounds wonderful Fay, where does it get its name from? Bob

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Fiona Davidson 09 August 2009

This is such a powerful and vivid piece Fay...feel like I was with you...Fi 10++++

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Tom Balch 09 August 2009

Beautiful images and very well penned Fay,10 + Tom

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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