Wednesday, March 9, 2016

Polly Comments

Rating: 3.8

She wore a black shawl and she wore it well,
Polly was her name and her story I'll tell.
She was born on the day that Parnell passed away,
I am her granddaughter and my name is Mai.
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Mai Murphy Venn
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Jacson Gelato 09 March 2016

An innovative form of poetry, very free flowing and cohesive. Reads like a short story, yet follows Sylvia Plath's sorrowful attribution. Good grammatical elements.

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