Friday, July 23, 2021

Polluted Spirits Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the sense of emaan dawns
On the corroded hearts and dirtied spirits
All the wrongs transform into right
All the unlawful is changed
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 January 2022

All the hypocrisy within changes For the betterment of the hereafter.....appreciated the message!

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 July 2021

Very true, Aarzoo. Deceit is the order of the day. Lovely poem. Full score

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Varsha M 24 July 2021

Ma'am a meaningful message. An eye-opener. Full of meaning. I wrote comment on this but it's not shown.

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M Asim Nehal 24 July 2021

Emaan is the change which brings the required change. Fantastic.5*****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2021

So true, dear Poetess. Enjoyed much your well thought out words, a true impressive poem

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Varsha M 23 July 2021

Very true words an eye opener. Indeed we all should regularly introspect and bring changes out.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 July 2021

An excellent poem... thoughtfully put in absolute brevity with precision

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