Leaving all the worries
With no hurries
Arms on eachother's back
On a Bohemian track
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words dancing in rhythm...a poetic polka this...good work, Sameer...10
The joyful dance of life. Your rhymes add music to the form. May the happiness be continued, the worries only a shadow. Take care.10 for a poet doctor. Warm regards, Sandra
excellently composed rhythm and rhyme piece. quite descriptive i could visualise it. nice work.10
you know Sameer, i actually saw the polka dancers. you have very vividly captured the rhythm and beat, bonohmie and camraderie- lovers having fun- lovely. you have great ability to sketch lively scenes...10 Mamta
Love it! effortlessly effective!