Thursday, February 2, 2012

Police Commissioner Comments

Rating: 5.0

I used to carry, a badge and a gun,
It was impressive, but not at all fun.
I was Police Commissioner, my cops called me 'McMillan.'
But nobody could see just how I was feeling.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 03 February 2012

A big applause for this one Juan; especially to learn something so special about someone I've come to admire as a poet/writer, and now even more so as a human being. You're a real class act amigo; thanks for sharing a bit of yourself with all of us. By the way, glad to hear ya put that badge next to the Duke!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 02 February 2012

Excellent write! A very engaging story poem that's complete with rhyme and rhythm as well as an amusing theme. You do write so well and glad you hang the badge & gun and took on the pen!

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