Sunday, January 29, 2012

Police Cell Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm sitting in a police cell
but my mind is in hell
They know I'm mentally ill
they know i'm going to say
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Dave Alan Walker
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Emmanuel Odei Oduro 13 February 2012

a good picture of the fate of many innocent people. an excellent poem

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shy beauty 03 February 2012

wow this is a good write.. takin your words but that is how i can describe it.. was this about you or was it just there

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 03 February 2012

Great poem as always Dave, though its sad.......

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Dead Leaf 30 January 2012

sometimes our innocence can't be proved before anyone......But nobody can hide the truth for ever

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Silentpoet Grl 30 January 2012

strong poem - your thoughts/emotion written clearly 'can still smell the despair' - another great write!

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Unwritten Soul 30 January 2012

Small square and bored what this place called? ? police cell but what the innocent guy doing in that? if it in movie than it's right but in reality is what we call justice suffers brutality..Oh please send right one to the cell...at least police can has less work to do as the right criminal is inside...or the crime never less_Unwritten Soul

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Tatyana Sharma 29 January 2012

Sir, its a very thought provoking poem, with a very powerful comment on autocratic societies. Thank you for liking my poem.

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Eric Cockrell 29 January 2012

the smell that never goes away... i know! another great poem!

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Asif Andalib 29 January 2012

Corruption in police force is very bad and if it's a culture it becomes disastrous for the innocent peoples! Nice poem.

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Saranyan Saranyan 29 January 2012

Interesting poem. True incident?

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Katherine Val 29 January 2012

i loved the last stanza

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