Thursday, July 17, 2008

Poisoned By Memory Comments

Rating: 4.5

I remember when you past me by...
I remember when my glimpse caught you in my eye...
No oxygen no air nothing but a solid stare...
I remember that feeling that never stopped running threw the soles of my feet...
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Brooke Moran
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Emma Woods 14 August 2008

wow this is again lovely! ! The words 'deadly kiss' is such an effective way of describing a memory it's wonderful! ! Once again - I love it :)

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Greenwolfe 1962 17 July 2008

The title is a little strange for this poem, but I guess it had to have one. They all do. But the writing was the outstanding trait of this piece and it demonstrated that this girl can write. She may just be a novelist someday. I can see her doing that. Good stuff. But the real treat was the writer's performance. GW62

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