Thursday, August 9, 2018

Poisoned Apple (Fruit From The Forbidden Tree) Comments

Rating: 4.4

He told me:

I was the best bag of heroin he ever tried
When he spoke to me,
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Axley Jade Blaze
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What a marvellous poem!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 April 2019

YOU HAVE SHOWN AN APPLE WITH TWO TESTES THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT IT IS STORAGE OF SEEDS SPERMS BILLIONS CAN'T BY A NAKED EYE SEEN NOW ALL AGAIN DRINK IT JOYOUSLY ITS PROTEIN

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Crayon Poet 12 August 2018

What a ride to recover from - even for your reader!

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Whew! totally get you even although ive never been there!

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Nicole D''Settemi 20 January 2020

Thank you so much for your feedback! I am very satisfied it had such an impact. Sincerely- I am moved by that. Xx NDS

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