Tuesday, June 10, 2014

Poisoned Comments

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my whole world and life crumbles around
there is no noise, there is no sound
a slow deterioration of all land scape
nothing can now save my place
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Colleen Courtney 10 June 2014

A nicely written piece filled with that helpless feeling of losing control. Can feel the emotions of hopelessness and frustration. Well done.

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