Tuesday, January 1, 2013

Poison Ivy Comments

Rating: 4.7

Wrapping around your limbs
they take a vice like grip
they'll bleed you dry
until there's nothing left
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Dave Alan Walker
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Sandy Player 10 January 2013

the sort of person that never had a conscience or even a small part of their brain labelled heart dept. you've met them with the same coldness. great

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Kevin Patrick 04 January 2013

Cannibals never last long, good use of a metaphor, for the hurt some people cause

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Valerie Dohren 03 January 2013

This poem fits so many situations. Excellent write Dave.

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Robert Green 02 January 2013

This is true, great write :)

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Heather Wilson 02 January 2013

Sadly there are many people around such as this, a well written piece Dave.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 02 January 2013

thought this poem is short, it speaks thousands of words! well done!

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

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